Re: [Pce] Martin Vigoureux's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-stateful-hpce-13: (with COMMENT)

Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 17 September 2019 10:12 UTC

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From: Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 17 Sep 2019 15:42:08 +0530
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Subject: Re: [Pce] Martin Vigoureux's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-stateful-hpce-13: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Martin,

Thanks for the nits. I incorporated them in the working copy.

Thanks!
Dhruv

Commit: https://github.com/dhruvdhody/ietf/commit/4fa5e2f64a050fcc42bcfaf85c492b8dd5b4e863

Diff: https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-pce-stateful-hpce-13&url2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/dhruvdhody/ietf/master/draft-ietf-pce-stateful-hpce-14.txt

On Tue, Sep 17, 2019 at 3:16 PM Martin Vigoureux via Datatracker
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> Hi,
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> thank you for this document. I only have nit type comments:
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> s/hierarchy of stateful PCEs play a crucial role/hierarchy of stateful PCEs plays a crucial role/
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>    The ability to compute shortest constrained TE LSPs
> not sure what you mean by "shortest constrained"
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> s/the MDSC decompose/the MDSC decomposes/
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>    Different signaling methods for inter-domain RSVP-TE signaling
> s/methods/options/
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> s/the PCE further propagates/the C-PCE further propagates/
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