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Hi, Roman:

Thanks for your suggestions.
I have updated the "SHOULD" in these sections to "MUST", to eliminate =
the ambiguity.
I have parsed all the content of this document and update "SHOULD" with =
"MUST" selectively according to their necessity.
The updated draft will be uploaded soon to reflect the above changes.


Best Regards

Aijun Wang
China Telecom




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DISCUSS:
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In -35 a number of changes to the IANA considerations were introduced.=20
Specifically, various "shoulds" were replaced with "SHOULDs".  This has =
created
ambiguity in the following:

-- Section 13.4,
   The reference for the new Error-type/value SHOULD be set to this
   document.

-- Section 13.5
   Each bit SHOULD be tracked with the following qualities:

-- Section 13.6
   Each
   value SHOULD be tracked with the following qualities: value, meaning,
   and defining RFC.

-- Section 13.7
   Each value SHOULD
   be tracked with the following qualities:

-- Section 13.8
   Each bit
   SHOULD be tracked with the following qualities:

What isn't clear when IANA would choose not to track these qualities or =
set the
values.  Why create this ambiguity?


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COMMENT:
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Thank you to Mallory Knodel for the GENART review.

Thank for addressing my COMMENT feedback and initial DISCUSS position.



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