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Re: [Pce] AD review: draft-ietf-pce-iro-update

Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.dhody@huawei.com> Tue, 15 March 2016 03:41 UTC

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From: Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.dhody@huawei.com>
To: "BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A" <db3546@att.com>, "pce@ietf.org" <pce@ietf.org>
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Hi WG,

I have made the update. See ¨C


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-iro-update/



There's also a htmlized version available at:

https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pce-iro-update-06



A diff from the previous version is available at:

https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pce-iro-update-06

Thanks Deborah for suggested improvements!

Regards,
Dhruv

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From: Pce [mailto:pce-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A
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Subject: [Pce] AD review: draft-ietf-pce-iro-update

Hi,

I¡¯ve done my AD review of this document and only had a few comments:

¡¤         I¡¯ve provided the author with some editorial suggestions to improve the abstract and introduction.
¡¤         As the survey document will not be progressed to RFC, it will be best to remove the reference to it from this document, and reword a bit these sentences on it.

Dhruv is updating the document for these edits and I¡¯ll then start the IETF Last Call.

Thanks!
Deborah

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