[Pce] Martin Vigoureux's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-10: (with COMMENT)

Martin Vigoureux via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 15 May 2019 13:18 UTC

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Subject: [Pce] Martin Vigoureux's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-10: (with COMMENT)

Martin Vigoureux has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-10: No Objection

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Hi,

thanks for this Document. I have a couple of comments/suggestions:

3.2.1
   If the PCE understands the H-PCE path computation request but did not
   advertise its H-PCE capability, it MUST send a PCErr message with
   Error-Type=TBD8 ("H-PCE error") and Error-Value=1 ("Parent PCE
   Capability not advertised").
I believe the description of the error is incorrect and should be: "H-PCE Capability not advertised"


3.6.  SVEC Object
   o  O (Domain diverse) bit - TBD14
You call it the O bit here but not in the IANA registry. I guess the two should be consistent.


In IANA section:
s/H-PCE-FLAGS/H-PCE-FLAG/ (twice)
s/assign three new/assign four new/

typos
s/suitible /suitable/
s/Aditionally/Additionally/

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