Re: [Pce] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-for-pce-controller-12: (with COMMENT)

"Pengshuping (Peng Shuping)" <pengshuping@huawei.com> Fri, 26 February 2021 01:57 UTC

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From: "Pengshuping (Peng Shuping)" <pengshuping@huawei.com>
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Thread-Topic: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-for-pce-controller-12: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Pce] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-for-pce-controller-12: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Murray,

Thank you for your comments! Please find the diff and the responses in line below. Thank you!

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Subject: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-for-pce-controller-12: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-for-pce-controller-12: No Objection

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In Section 2, RFC 8283 isn't a "draft".

Shuping> Removed!

In Section 5.5.1:

   Once the label operations are completed, the PCE SHOULD send a PCUpd
   message to the ingress PCC.

Why "SHOULD"?  Is there another option?   Why might an implementer do something else?

Shuping> Changed to MUST. Thanks for spotting this!

The SHOULDs elsewhere in Section 5 are probably worth a second look too.

Shuping> Ack

Best Regards, 
Shuping