[Pce] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-lsp-scheduling-18: (with COMMENT)

[Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-lsp-scheduling-18: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thank you for the work put into this document.

Please find below one non-blocking COMMENTs.

I hope that this helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

== COMMENTS ==

-- Section 4.2.2.1 --
May be am I failing to understand this part of the sentence "|X| is the minimum
value from 0 to max(P, Q)" as it is not the same as "where -P <= X <= Q" or
does the "|X|" not represent the absolute value of X ?

== NITS ==

-- Section 4.2.2.1 --
Please use "are" rather than "is" in "Note that both Ta and Tb is shifted by
the same 'X'"