Re: [pcp] WGLC: draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-04.txt comments due by AUG 18

<mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> Wed, 20 August 2014 09:02 UTC

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From: mohamed.boucadair@orange.com
To: Dave Thaler <dthaler@microsoft.com>, "draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection@tools.ietf.org>
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Hi Dave,

Thank you for the review. 

A new version that takes into account your review is available online. Please double check this diff: http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-05&url2=draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-06 

Cheers,
Med

>-----Message d'origine-----
>De : pcp [mailto:pcp-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de Dave Thaler
>Envoyé : mercredi 20 août 2014 01:23
>À : draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection@tools.ietf.org
>Cc : pcp@ietf.org
>Objet : Re: [pcp] WGLC: draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-04.txt comments due
>by AUG 18
>
>I just reviewed -05 and believe that from a technical standpoint, the
>document is ready.
>
>I did find a couple of editorial nits that would be good to address, which
>can
>be found in the marked up copy at
>http://research.microsoft.com/~dthaler/draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-
>05.pdf
>
>-Dave
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Dave Thaler
>> Sent: Tuesday, August 12, 2014 10:07 AM
>> To: pcp@ietf.org
>> Subject: RE: WGLC: draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-04.txt comments due by
>> AUG 18
>>
>> Just a reminder that there is one week left in this last call.
>> Please send your comments, even if it's just "Looks ready".
>>
>> In this case, silence does not mean consent, silence means lack of
>interest in
>> progressing the doc :)
>>
>> -Dave
>>
>> > -----Original Message-----
>> > From: Dave Thaler
>> > Sent: Monday, July 21, 2014 6:53 AM
>> > To: pcp@ietf.org
>> > Subject: WGLC: draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-04.txt comments due by
>> > AUG
>> > 18
>> >
>> > -02 of this document went through a WGLC back in February but has had
>> > some significant changes since then.  This email initiates a new
>> > Working Group Last Call on
>> > draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-04 to conclude on Monday, August 18th.
>> > We believe that this should give sufficient time to review, taking
>> > into account IETF week and various travel plans.  Please send comments
>to
>> the list.
>> >
>> > As a reminder, when responding to a WGLC, what we chairs are looking
>> > for is a statement about document quality (not really about whether
>> > the mechanism should move forward).  That is, state whether you think
>> > the document is ready as is, or if not, what issues you see.
>> >
>> > Thanks,
>> > -Dave
>> >
>> > -----Original Message-----
>> > From: pcp [mailto:pcp-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of internet-
>> > drafts@ietf.org
>> > Sent: Monday, July 21, 2014 1:45 AM
>> > To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
>> > Cc: pcp@ietf.org
>> > Subject: [pcp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-04.txt
>> >
>> >
>> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> >  This draft is a work item of the Port Control Protocol Working Group
>> > of the IETF.
>> >
>> >         Title           : PCP Server Selection
>> >         Authors         : Mohamed Boucadair
>> >                           Reinaldo Penno
>> >                           Dan Wing
>> >                           Prashanth Patil
>> >                           Tirumaleswar Reddy
>> > 	Filename        : draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-04.txt
>> > 	Pages           : 11
>> > 	Date            : 2014-07-20
>> >
>> > Abstract:
>> >    The document specifies the behavior to be followed by a PCP client
>to
>> >    contact its PCP server(s) when one or several PCP server IP
>addresses
>> >    are configured.
>> >
>> >    This document updates RFC6887.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection/
>> >
>> > There's also a htmlized version available at:
>> > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-04
>> >
>> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> > http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-04
>> >
>> >
>> > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
>> > submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at
>tools.ietf.org.
>> >
>> > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>> > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>> >
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