Re: [pcp] Official reviewers Request for Learn NAT64 PREFIX64s using PCP

Simon Perreault <simon.perreault@viagenie.ca> Mon, 20 May 2013 14:52 UTC

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Le 2013-05-16 13:19, Reinaldo Penno (repenno) a écrit :
>> Title  : Learn NAT64 PREFIX64s using PCP
>> URL    : http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pcp-nat64-prefix64-00
>> Authors: M. Boucadair

And here's my review...

The draft is almost ready. One remaining issue that should be easy to 
fix: the reference to draft-boucadair-pcp-rtp-rtcp should be replaced by 
one to draft-ietf-pcp-port-set, and the example in section 3.3 adjusted.

Simon
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