Re: [pcp] WGLC: draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-04.txt comments due by AUG 18

Dave Thaler <dthaler@microsoft.com> Tue, 19 August 2014 23:22 UTC

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Subject: Re: [pcp] WGLC: draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-04.txt comments due by AUG 18
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I just reviewed -05 and believe that from a technical standpoint, the document is ready.

I did find a couple of editorial nits that would be good to address, which can
be found in the marked up copy at
http://research.microsoft.com/~dthaler/draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-05.pdf

-Dave

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Dave Thaler
> Sent: Tuesday, August 12, 2014 10:07 AM
> To: pcp@ietf.org
> Subject: RE: WGLC: draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-04.txt comments due by
> AUG 18
> 
> Just a reminder that there is one week left in this last call.
> Please send your comments, even if it's just "Looks ready".
> 
> In this case, silence does not mean consent, silence means lack of interest in
> progressing the doc :)
> 
> -Dave
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Dave Thaler
> > Sent: Monday, July 21, 2014 6:53 AM
> > To: pcp@ietf.org
> > Subject: WGLC: draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-04.txt comments due by
> > AUG
> > 18
> >
> > -02 of this document went through a WGLC back in February but has had
> > some significant changes since then.  This email initiates a new
> > Working Group Last Call on
> > draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-04 to conclude on Monday, August 18th.
> > We believe that this should give sufficient time to review, taking
> > into account IETF week and various travel plans.  Please send comments to
> the list.
> >
> > As a reminder, when responding to a WGLC, what we chairs are looking
> > for is a statement about document quality (not really about whether
> > the mechanism should move forward).  That is, state whether you think
> > the document is ready as is, or if not, what issues you see.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > -Dave
> >
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: pcp [mailto:pcp-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of internet-
> > drafts@ietf.org
> > Sent: Monday, July 21, 2014 1:45 AM
> > To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
> > Cc: pcp@ietf.org
> > Subject: [pcp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-04.txt
> >
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> >  This draft is a work item of the Port Control Protocol Working Group
> > of the IETF.
> >
> >         Title           : PCP Server Selection
> >         Authors         : Mohamed Boucadair
> >                           Reinaldo Penno
> >                           Dan Wing
> >                           Prashanth Patil
> >                           Tirumaleswar Reddy
> > 	Filename        : draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-04.txt
> > 	Pages           : 11
> > 	Date            : 2014-07-20
> >
> > Abstract:
> >    The document specifies the behavior to be followed by a PCP client to
> >    contact its PCP server(s) when one or several PCP server IP addresses
> >    are configured.
> >
> >    This document updates RFC6887.
> >
> >
> >
> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection/
> >
> > There's also a htmlized version available at:
> > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-04
> >
> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pcp-server-selection-04
> >
> >
> > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> > submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> >
> > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> >
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