Re: [pim] Fw: I-D Action: draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-16.txt

Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> Mon, 09 March 2020 13:33 UTC

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Subject: Re: [pim] Fw: I-D Action: draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-16.txt
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Hi, and thanks for the changes.

You responded to my comment about BCP 14 not by removing the BCP 14
references, but by changing one instance of "optional" to "OPTIONAL".
I think that's the wrong approach: that particular one is not made any
better by making it a BCP 14 key word.  There really is no point in
citing BCP 14 here, as far as I can tell, and I really do suggest that
you go back to "optional" and remove the BCP 14 boilerplate and
references instead.  I'm happy to chat about that if it helps.

That said, this is a non-blocking comment, so you can carry on as you
think best.

Barry

On Sun, Mar 8, 2020 at 11:46 PM <zhang.zheng@zte.com.cn> wrote:
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> Hi Ben, Roman, Barry, Rob, Alvaro, Reshad,
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> Thank you very much for your comments and modification suggestions.
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> And many thanks to everyone who give us suggestions.
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> We updated the draft to 16 version.
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> Please review it. Hope this verson can be well.
>
>
> Best regards,
>
> Sandy
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> 原始邮件
> 发件人:internet-drafts@ietf.org <internet-drafts@ietf.org>
> 收件人:i-d-announce@ietf.org <i-d-announce@ietf.org>rg>;
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> 日 期 :2020年03月09日 11:26
> 主 题 :[pim] I-D Action: draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-16.txt
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Protocols for IP Multicast WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : A YANG Data Model for Multicast Source Discovery Protocol (MSDP)
>         Authors         : Xufeng Liu
>                           Zheng Zhang
>                           Anish Peter
>                           Mahesh Sivakumar
>                           Feng Guo
>                           Pete McAllister
>     Filename        : draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-16.txt
>     Pages           : 34
>     Date            : 2020-03-08
>
> Abstract:
>    This document defines a YANG data model for the configuration and
>    management of Multicast Source Discovery Protocol (MSDP) Protocol.
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> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang/
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> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-16
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-16
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> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-16
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