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From: "Andrew Stone (Nokia)" <andrew.stone@nokia.com>
To: Michael McBride <michael.mcbride@futurewei.com>, "pim@ietf.org" <pim@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [pim] wglc: draft-ietf-pim-sr-p2mp-policy
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Hi PIM, SPRING

I've read the latest version and support WGLC. I find the content in the document a clear read for the solution and it’s nice to see this solution documents getting to a polished state. The underlying replication segment RFC from SPRING was a good milestone, and PCE+IDR is actively developing the solution implementation details required to achieve what’s described in draft-ietf-pim-sr-p2mp-policy.

Authors, minor nits:

Section 2:

-> remove plural “s” -> /Root node of a P2MP trees/Root node of a P2MP tree/
-> /Tree-ID: A identifier/Tree-ID: An identifier/
-> should "path" and "paths" be capitalized when in context of "Candidate path" ?. Related, some text has "candidate path" and others has "Candidate path".

Section 4.1:
-> /in a using a Path/in a Path/

Section 4.1.1
-> Bullet 3. Create candidate path should likely include the same arguments as update (Preference, Constraints, Optimization, ...)
-> /CP-ID is identifier/CP-ID is the identifier/

Section 4.2.3
-> /Polciy/Policy/


Thanks
Andrew

From: spring <spring-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Michael McBride <michael.mcbride@futurewei.com>
Date: Sunday, April 21, 2024 at 10:37 PM
To: pim@ietf.org <pim@ietf.org>
Cc: spring@ietf.org <spring@ietf.org>
Subject: [spring] wglc: draft-ietf-pim-sr-p2mp-policy
Hello good people,

Today begins a two week wglc for https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-pim-sr-p2mp-policy-08. The related (normative) replication segment draft has now been published as a standards track RFC. The poll in the Brisbane pim room was 3 in favor and 0 against. Please respond with your opinions on the advancement of this draft.

Thanks,
mike

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