Re: [pim] AD Review of draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-10

Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> Sat, 30 May 2020 11:59 UTC

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Subject: Re: [pim] AD Review of draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-10
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Hi!

I have requested the IETF Last Call to start.  There are just a couple of
unused references that need to be removed:


  == Unused Reference: 'RFC4604' is defined on line 1813, but no explicit
     reference was found in the text

  == Unused Reference: 'RFC4607' is defined on line 1818, but no explicit
     reference was found in the text


You can take care of that with any other LC comments that may come in.

Thanks!!

Alvaro.

On May 30, 2020 at 5:15:19 AM, Hongji Zhao (hongji.zhao@ericsson.com) wrote:

Hi Alvaro,

We have already addressed all your comments and uploaded the latest version
as draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-11.
Thanks a lot!

BR/Hongji

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From: Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>
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To: Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com>
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Subject: RE: AD Review of draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-09

On May 2, 2020 at 8:39:48 AM, Hongji Zhao wrote:


Hongji:


Hi!  How are you?


> We have already addressed all your comments and uploaded the latest
> version as draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-10.

First, to answer your question about rfc4541:  Yes, it must be a Normative
reference as that is where snooping is defined.  We will take care of the
DownRef registry as we get the document approved.

I need this reference in the right place so that the IETF Last Call call
its out.

Along with that, I have some comments on -10 (see below).


Thanks!

Alvaro.



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