[pim] Re: Éric Vyncke's Yes on draft-ietf-pim-3228bis-06: (with COMMENT)
Brian Haberman <brian@innovationslab.net> Mon, 05 August 2024 14:31 UTC
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Hi Éric, These are all good suggestions. Will incorporate into an update. Regards, Brian On 7/29/24 7:47 AM, Éric Vyncke via Datatracker wrote: > Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-pim-3228bis-06: Yes > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-3228bis/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > # Éric Vyncke, INT AD, comments for draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip-05 > > Thank you for the work put into this document. > > Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be > appreciated even if only for my own education). > > Special thanks to Stig Venaas for the shepherd's detailed write-up including > the WG consensus _and_ the justification of the intended status. > > Other thanks to Dave Thaler, the Internet directorate reviewer (at my request), > please consider this int-dir review: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-pim-3228bis-06-intdir-telechat-thaler-2024-07-25/ > > I hope that this review helps to improve the document, > > Regards, > > -éric > > # COMMENTS (non-blocking) > > ## Section 2.2 > > A specific version is written for IGMPv3 but not for MLD. Suggest adding also a > specific version for MLD > > ## Section 2.1.2 > > Suggest adding a specific section to the reference to RFC 4443. > > ## Section 6.2 > > Should the two -bis IETF drafts be normative ? If only to ensure that thaey are > part of a RFC editor's cluster ? > > >
- [pim] Éric Vyncke's Yes on draft-ietf-pim-3228bis… Éric Vyncke via Datatracker
- [pim] Re: Éric Vyncke's Yes on draft-ietf-pim-322… Brian Haberman