Re: [pim] draft-ietf-pim-drlb WGLC

"Holland, Jake" <jholland@akamai.com> Tue, 13 November 2018 20:41 UTC

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From: "Holland, Jake" <jholland@akamai.com>
To: Stig Venaas <stig@venaas.com>
CC: "Mankamana Mishra (mankamis)" <mankamis@cisco.com>, Michael McBride <Michael.McBride@huawei.com>, "pim@ietf.org" <pim@ietf.org>
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Thanks Stig.

I support progressing the doc.

-Jake

PS: Maybe it's not an issue, but I also just noticed that the re-use of "TBD" in 2 places instead of "TBD1" and "TBD2" is an ambiguity that leaves room for a weird error that could be easily avoided if you're willing to make one more very minor rev.

On 2018-11-13, 09:57, "Stig Venaas" <stig@venaas.com> wrote:

    Hi
    
    I've now posted revision 10 which I believe addresses Jake's comments
    on the IANA Considerations section.
    
    Stig
    
    On Mon, Oct 29, 2018 at 1:23 PM Holland, Jake <jholland@akamai.com> wrote:
    >
    > Thanks for the updates, Mankamana. After reading through it again, I think it’s in good shape.
    >
    >
    >
    > The only issue I see remaining is that the IANA considerations section doesn’t meet the guidelines in BCP 26:
    >
    > https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc8126#section-1.3
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    >
    >
    > I think the checklists in section 1.3 of RFC 8126 ask for some pieces of information that weren’t provided in the draft’s IANA section:
    >
    > - “creating a new registry”: #1, #3, #4, #5, and #6, and
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    > - “registering into an existing registry”: #1 and #4
    >
    >
    >
    > After those changes I support progressing the doc, and thanks again to the authors for their efforts in resolving all the issues.
    >
    >
    >
    > Jake
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    >
    > From: "Mankamana Mishra (mankamis)" <mankamis@cisco.com>
    > Date: 2018-10-22 at 21:04
    > To: Michael McBride <Michael.McBride@huawei.com>, "pim@ietf.org" <pim@ietf.org>
    > Subject: Re: [pim] draft-ietf-pim-drlb WGLC
    >
    >
    >
    > As a co-author I think document is ready to progress. Support progress of this document. We already have implementation for this draft.
    >
    >
    >
    > Thanks
    >
    > Mankamana
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    >
    > From: pim <pim-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Michael McBride <Michael.McBride@huawei.com>
    > Date: Monday, October 22, 2018 at 8:25 PM
    > To: "pim@ietf.org" <pim@ietf.org>
    > Subject: [pim] draft-ietf-pim-drlb WGLC
    >
    >
    >
    > Dear pim people,
    >
    >
    >
    > Today begins a two week wglc for draft-ietf-pim-drlb-09 which has addressed all comments to date, including most recently from Jake Holland. Please review the draft again and reply with your opinion on this document’s readiness to be sent to the iesg.
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    > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pim-drlb-09
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    >
    >
    > thanks,
    >
    > mike
    >
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