[pim] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-pim-reserved-bits-03: (with COMMENT)

Roman Danyliw via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 16 September 2019 15:30 UTC

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Subject: [pim] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-pim-reserved-bits-03: (with COMMENT)
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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-pim-reserved-bits-03: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I support Barry Leiba’s DISCUSS position on clarifying the structure of the
IANA table.  I would add that the convention of using the decimal point to
convey a sub-type number should be explained (i.e., 13.4 is type=13, sub-type=4)

Editorial Nits:
-- Per Page Title.  Typo.  s/Type Extention/Extension/

-- Section 3. Typo.  s/FIgure 1/Figure 1/

-- Section 4.2.  Unlike Section 4.1 and 4.3, this section doesn’t say “The
usage of the bit is defined in that document”.

-- Section 5.  Capitalize. s/pim extension/PIM extensions/