[pim] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-pim-rfc8736bis-03: (with COMMENT)

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draft-ietf-pim-rfc8736bis-03: No Objection

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# Éric Vyncke, INT AD, comments for draft-ietf-pim-rfc8736bis-03

Thank you for the work put into this document.

Please find below one COMMENT point (but replies would be appreciated even if
only for my own education).

Special thanks to Mike McBride for the shepherd's detailed write-up including
the WG consensus and the justification of the intended status.

I hope that this review helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

## Section 3

Can the new header still be named "common header" when section 5 redefines it ?
Nothing critical here, more wordsmithing (and I have no proposals).