Re: [pim] Last Call: <draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-12.txt>

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Hi Tom,

Thanks a lot for your comments. We will address them ASAP.

BR/Hongji

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   1. Re: Last Call: <draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-12.txt>
      (A Yang Data Model for IGMP and MLD Snooping) to Proposed
      Standard (tom petch)


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Subject: Re: [pim] Last Call:
	<draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-12.txt> (A Yang Data Model for
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The RPC to clear the tables are somewhat insecure.  The default is to clear all so a mistake in entering a valid address will clear everything.  It would be more secure to have an explicit option for clear all.

The RPC to clear the tables has no restrictions; a NACM deny all might be appropriate

RPC or ACTION?  the latter may be suitable.

RFC5790 is referenced by the YANG module but is not in the I-D References

feature feature* is unusual; that an identifier is a feature is usually apparent from the context in which the identifier is used and so including 'feature' in the name is redundant  

And to state the obvious the formatting lacks leading spaces which will doubtless get fixed some time.

Tom Petch






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Subject: Last Call: <draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-12.txt> (A Yang Data Model for IGMP and MLD Snooping) to Proposed Standard


The IESG has received a request from the Protocols for IP Multicast WG (pim) to consider the following document: - 'A Yang Data Model for IGMP and MLD Snooping'
  <draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-12.txt> as Proposed Standard

The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the last-call@ietf.org mailing lists by 2020-06-15. Exceptionally, comments may be sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting.

Abstract


This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to configure and manage Internet Group Management Protocol (IGMP) and Multicast Listener Discovery (MLD) Snooping devices. The YANG module in this document conforms to Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA).




The file can be obtained via
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang/



No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.


The document contains these normative downward references.
See RFC 3967 for additional information:
    rfc4541: Considerations for Internet Group Management Protocol (IGMP) and Multicast Listener Discovery (MLD) Snooping Switches (Informational - IETF stream)




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