Re: [pim] draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-extension WGLC

Leonard Giuliano <lenny@juniper.net> Tue, 15 December 2020 18:48 UTC

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Date: Tue, 15 Dec 2020 10:48:10 -0800
From: Leonard Giuliano <lenny@juniper.net>
To: Stig Venaas <stig@venaas.com>
CC: Michael McBride <michael.mcbride@futurewei.com>, "pim@ietf.org" <pim@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [pim] draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-extension WGLC
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A few minor nits:

-Sect3, 1st sentence: "A previously reserved bit in the IGMPv2 and MLDv2 
headers..."
	-did you mean IGMPv3?

-Sect4, 1st para, penultimate sentence: "...if they support non of the 
extension types..."
	-"none" instead of "non"

Otherwise, looks good to me to progress.

-Lenny

On Sun, 13 Dec 2020, Stig Venaas wrote:

| 
| 
| Hi all
| 
| This draft is in WGLC, but it has been very quiet. I'm hoping some of
| you can find the time to read through it and comment. It's a fairly
| short draft.
| 
| Thanks,
| Stig
| 
| On Mon, Dec 7, 2020 at 4:23 PM Michael McBride
| <michael.mcbride@futurewei.com> wrote:
| >
| > Hello all,
| >
| >
| >
| > Today begins a two week wglc for https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-extension-02__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!WP1Dg8iBl-8iIwKxP4jPe3EGdtsUBL_UFArvxu1Qgm2c9ufO9Gf-K5M3tmN63lk$
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| >
| >
| > Please review (it?s a quick read) and let us know your opinion on it?s readiness to progress to the iesg.
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| >
| > Thanks,
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| > mike
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