Re: [pim] Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-yang-13: (with COMMENT)

Xufeng Liu <xufeng.liu.ietf@gmail.com> Mon, 10 June 2019 01:39 UTC

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Subject: Re: [pim] Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-yang-13: (with COMMENT)
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Attached please find the proposed changes:

* Protocol version checks have been added to the following parameters:
  - last-member-query-interval
  - max-group-sources
  - source-policy
  - explicit-tracking
  - lite-exclude-filter
  - ssm-map
* During the process of adding version checks, some default values were
found problematic and fixed:
  - last-member-query-interval
  - query-interval
  - query-max-response-time
  - require-router-alert
  - robustness-variable
  - version
* Descriptions have adjusted on the following parameters:
  - last-member-query-interval
  - query-interval
  - query-max-response-time
  - require-router-alert
  - robustness-variable
  - version
  - static-group
* “exclude-lite” has be changed to “lite-exclude-filter"

It would be appreciated if these changes can be reviewed.
Thanks,
- Xufeng

On Fri, Jun 7, 2019 at 9:22 PM Xufeng Liu <xufeng.liu.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:

> Thank Yisong for providing the valuable information. Some of my comments
> are:
>
> 1. For operational states, we do not need to add constraints. As specified
> in RFC8342, semantic constraints MAY be violated in the <operational>
> datastore. The server implementations usually do not need to perform such
> validations. Moreover, these leaves are not mandatory, so the server does
> not need to return any values when the protocol version does not provide.
> Such nodes include the “leave” nodes under “statistics”, and the “source”
> sub-tree.
>
> 2. Based on RFC2236, the IGMPv2 spec requires the presence of the IP
> Router Alert option. Should the default value of “require-router-alert” be
> “true” for IGMPv2?
>
> 3. Should we restrict “ssm-map” sub-tree to IGMPv3/MLDv2 only?
>
> 4. We cannot avoid the “source-addr” in the “static-group” sub-tree
> because it is a key for the list, but we may add a description to indicate
> that (S,G) is only supported by IGMPv3/MLDv2.
>
>
> Additional proposal:
>
> As the discussions on Benjamin’s review comments, it is proposed to
> replace “exclude-lite” with “lite-exclude-filter".
>
> Thanks,
>
> - Xufeng
>
> On Thu, Jun 6, 2019 at 2:17 AM Liuyisong <liuyisong@huawei.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi
>>
>>
>>
>>         I have gone  through the parameters in IGMP & MLD yang model, and
>> identified  the differences of the parameters based on version.
>>
>>
>>
>> Thanks
>>
>> Yisong
>>
>>
>>
>> *From:* Xufeng Liu [mailto:xufeng.liu.ietf@gmail.com
>> <xufeng.liu.ietf@gmail.com>]
>> *Sent:* Thursday, May 30, 2019 7:19 PM
>> *To:* Suresh Krishnan <suresh@kaloom.com>
>> *Cc:* The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-yang@ietf.org;
>> Stig Venaas <stig@venaas.com>; Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>;
>> pim-chairs@ietf.org; pim@ietf.org
>> *Subject:* Re: Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on
>> draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-yang-13: (with COMMENT)
>>
>>
>>
>> Hi Suresh,
>>
>>
>>
>> Thanks for the review and comments. Some of the version check could be
>> done in YANG, while the concern was the complexity added to the model, with
>> a cost to the usability. The authors will examine these cases and address
>> them using either approach as suggested. Maybe some of them use YANG and
>> others use explanation descriptions. In the case of the explanation
>> description, the system can do the validation at the backend and provide
>> feedback.
>>
>>
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> - Xufeng
>>
>>
>>
>> On Wed, May 29, 2019 at 6:04 PM Suresh Krishnan via Datatracker <
>> noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
>>
>> Suresh Krishnan has entered the following ballot position for
>> draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-yang-13: No Objection
>>
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>>
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>>
>>
>>
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> COMMENT:
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>> I do have a general concern with the document in relation to its handling
>> of
>> multiple protocol versions. There are features in the yang models that
>> should
>> be conditional but they do not seem to be. Here are some examples.
>>
>> * The source specific features are to be used with IGMPv3 and MLDv2 and
>> will
>> not work with the earlier versions * The router alert check is not
>> optional for
>> MLD or IGMPv3, but is required to be disabled for compatibility with
>> earlier
>> versions of IGMP. I would also make this feature conditional on the IGMP
>> version. If not you need to rethink the defaults for this.
>>
>> I would like to understand the authors' views on how they plan to address
>> the
>> potential consistency issues due to these features being unbound in the
>> model.
>> I would be fine if it is either addressed with yang constructs or with
>> some
>> explanatory text to this point.
>>
>>