Re: [pim] [**EXTERNAL**] Re: draft-ietf-pim-reserved-bits wglc

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From: "Duncan, Ian" <iduncan@ciena.com>
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Thread-Topic: [**EXTERNAL**] Re: [pim] draft-ietf-pim-reserved-bits wglc
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Subject: Re: [pim] [**EXTERNAL**] Re: draft-ietf-pim-reserved-bits wglc
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Hello --

I too support this document, at least in its goals. Also I concur with Bill that section 5 requires work. 

Suggest that:

 " This document defines types 13, 14 and 15 (Type Space Extension) each then allowing for up to 16 additional subtypes in each of these three types, ..." could be better way to begin, and then follow form throughout. Use of "subtype" is consistent with the bit-blocked illustration, and seems helpfully unambiguous.

Best .. Ian



On 2019-06-01, 22:41, "pim on behalf of William Atwood" <pim-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of william.atwood@concordia.ca> wrote:

    I support this document.
    
    I have the following nits:
    
    Section 1, para 2, line 5.  "the the" -> "the"
    
    Section 5, para 1, line 3.  "allowing for 48 additional types by for
    each of the three types"  I cannot parse this.  I assume that you want
    to do something with 16*3 = 48, but this does not cut it.
    
    Line 6.  "15.15 where" -> "15.15, where"
    
      Bill
    
    On 2019-05-31 8:00 p.m., Mike McBride wrote:
    > Hello good people of pim.
    > 
    > Today begins a two week wglc for draft-ietf-pim-reserved-bits. Please
    > review the draft and reply with your support/non support. And have a
    > great weekend.
    > 
    > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-reserved-bits/
    > 
    > thanks,
    > mike
    > 
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