Re: [pim] AD Review of draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-10

Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com> Sat, 30 May 2020 09:15 UTC

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From: Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com>
To: Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>
CC: Stig Venaas <stig@venaas.com>, "pim-chairs@ietf.org" <pim-chairs@ietf.org>, "pim@ietf.org" <pim@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [pim] AD Review of draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-10
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Hi Alvaro,

We have already addressed all your comments and uploaded the latest version as draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-11.
Thanks a lot!

BR/Hongji

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From: Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> 
Sent: Tuesday, May 12, 2020 5:14 AM
To: Hongji Zhao <hongji.zhao@ericsson.com>
Cc: Stig Venaas <stig@venaas.com>om>; pim-chairs@ietf.org; pim@ietf.org
Subject: RE: AD Review of draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-09

On May 2, 2020 at 8:39:48 AM, Hongji Zhao wrote:


Hongji:


Hi!  How are you?


> We have already addressed all your comments and uploaded the latest 
> version as draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-10.

First, to answer your question about rfc4541:  Yes, it must be a Normative reference as that is where snooping is defined.  We will take care of the DownRef registry as we get the document approved.

I need this reference in the right place so that the IETF Last Call call its out.

Along with that, I have some comments on -10 (see below).


Thanks!

Alvaro.



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