Re: [pim] I-D Action: draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-16.txt

Hi,

I agree with Rob, action example in A.3 is incomplete.

Regards,
Reshad.

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Date: Monday, March 9, 2020 at 7:53 AM
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Subject: RE: Fw:[pim] I-D Action: draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-16.txt

Hi Sandy,

Thanks for making these markups.

I wasn’t sure that your Actions example in A.3 was complete, it doesn’t look to be structurally correct, e.g. it doesn’t seem to identify the action that is being invoked.  It would also be useful to have a sentence before the action to describe what it is doing.

As a minor nit on 3.2, I would change reword the last paragraph:

OLD:

   The actions can be used to clear the connection of one specific MSDP
   peer, or clear the connections of all the MSDP peers, or clear some
   or all the SA caches.

PROPOSED:

   YANG actions are defined to clear the connection of one specific MSDP

   peer, clear the connections of all MSDP peers, or clear some

   or all the SA caches.

Regards,
Rob

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Subject: Fw:[pim] I-D Action: draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-16.txt

Hi Ben, Roman, Barry, Rob, Alvaro, Reshad,

Thank you very much for your comments and modification suggestions.

And many thanks to everyone who give us suggestions.

We updated the draft to 16 version.

Please review it. Hope this verson can be well.

Best regards,

Sandy

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主 题 ：[pim] I-D Action: draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-16.txt

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Protocols for IP Multicast WG of the IETF.

        Title           : A YANG Data Model for Multicast Source Discovery Protocol (MSDP)
        Authors         : Xufeng Liu
                          Zheng Zhang
                          Anish Peter
                          Mahesh Sivakumar
                          Feng Guo
                          Pete McAllister
    Filename        : draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-16.txt
    Pages           : 34
    Date            : 2020-03-08

Abstract:
   This document defines a YANG data model for the configuration and
   management of Multicast Source Discovery Protocol (MSDP) Protocol.

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