[pim] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-12

Brian Carpenter via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 07 June 2020 03:58 UTC

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Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review result: Ready

Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-12

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Document: draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-snooping-yang-12
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2020-06-07
IETF LC End Date: 2020-06-15
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Summary: Ready
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Comment:
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Since I am not a YANG expert, I did not check the YANG part. The text parts are
very well written and I have no comments to make.