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Re: [Pppext] [rbridge] working group last call for PPP TRILL protocol control protocol [was Re: I-D Action:draft-ietf-pppext-trill-protocol-02.txt]

James Carlson <carlsonj@workingcode.com> Sat, 22 January 2011 14:20 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Pppext] [rbridge] working group last call for PPP TRILL protocol control protocol [was Re: I-D Action:draft-ietf-pppext-trill-protocol-02.txt]
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On 1/21/11 9:37 PM, Donald Eastlake wrote:
> I have reviewed this draft and believe it should be advanced as a
> proposed standard but I suggest the following minor tweaks:
> 
> I believe references are not allowed in an Abstract so you may have to
> explicitly say "RFC 1661" if necessary, or perhaps this reference can
> just be moved to the first occurrence of PPP in the body.
> 
> Section 2.3, in the first sentence, for clarify suggest changing "the
> IS-IS Payload" with "the IS-IS Payload, starting with the IS-IS
> Network Layer Protocol Identifier byte (0x83),"

Both changes sound good to me; thanks!

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James Carlson         42.703N 71.076W         <carlsonj@workingcode.com>

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