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Re: [Pppext] [rbridge] working group last call for PPP TRILL protocol control protocol [was Re: I-D Action:draft-ietf-pppext-trill-protocol-02.txt]

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Sat, 22 January 2011 02:35 UTC

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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 21 Jan 2011 21:37:57 -0500
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Subject: Re: [Pppext] [rbridge] working group last call for PPP TRILL protocol control protocol [was Re: I-D Action:draft-ietf-pppext-trill-protocol-02.txt]
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I have reviewed this draft and believe it should be advanced as a
proposed standard but I suggest the following minor tweaks:

I believe references are not allowed in an Abstract so you may have to
explicitly say "RFC 1661" if necessary, or perhaps this reference can
just be moved to the first occurrence of PPP in the body.

Section 2.3, in the first sentence, for clarify suggest changing "the
IS-IS Payload" with "the IS-IS Payload, starting with the IS-IS
Network Layer Protocol Identifier byte (0x83),"

Thanks,
Donald
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On Sun, Jan 16, 2011 at 2:23 PM, James Carlson <carlsonj@workingcode.com> wrote:
> On 1/6/2011 10:45 AM, Internet-Drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>>       Title           : PPP TRILL Protocol Control Protocol
>>       Author(s)       : J. Carlson
>>       Filename        : draft-ietf-pppext-trill-protocol-02.txt
>>       Pages           : 6
>>       Date            : 2011-01-06
>>
>> The Point-to-Point Protocol (PPP) [1] defines a Link Control Protocol
>> (LCP) and a method for negotiating the use of multi-protocol traffic
>> over point-to-point links.  This document describes support for
>> Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links (TRILL) Protocol,
>> allowing direct communication between Routing Bridges (RBridges) via
>> PPP links.
>>
>> A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
>> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-pppext-trill-protocol-02.txt
>
> I'm starting a working group last-call comment period for this draft.
> The new version incorporates changes for all of the comments received up
> to this point.
>
> Last call will run for two weeks.  Please submit any comments,
> questions, or concerns you might have to me or to the pppext@ietf.org
> mailing list (or both) on or before Sunday, January 30th, 2011.
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