Re: [ppsp] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf-ppsp-base-tracker-protocol-10: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

["Huangyihong (Rachel)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Ben,

Apologize for the careless when editing the draft. I'll go through this draft one more time to make sure it won't happen again.

BR,
Rachel


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Ben Campbell [mailto:[e-mail]]
> Sent: Wednesday, December 16, 2015 3:52 AM
> To: Huangyihong (Rachel)
> Cc: [e-mail]; [e-mail]; The IESG;
> [e-mail]; Zongning
> Subject: Re: Ben Campbell's Discuss on
> draft-ietf-ppsp-base-tracker-protocol-10: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> 
> Hi,
> 
> Looking at the updated document, I have some minor comments on the
> changes. Otherwise, I think at least my substantive comments have all been
> addressed.
> 
> - I notice multiple occurrences of "edit-itis" in the changed text.
> (That is, grammar errors introduced by incomplete edits.). I suggest one more
> proofreading pass after you have made all your planned edits. I mention a few
> instances below, but I think there are more.
> 
> - Definitions of seeder and leech: The 2119 keywords probably do not belong in
> the term definition. I _think_ (but did not verify) that this is specified elsewhere
> in the document. It's okay to mention the requirement in the term definition,
> just not "normatively"
> 
> - 1.2.2, 1st paragraph last sentence:
> The new sentence about peer ID formats is internally redundant. I suspect
> someone started to edit it but didn't finish.
> 
> - 6.2:
> 
> s/declaim/claim
> 
> I cannot parse the sentence starting with "For Trackers...". Does this mean
> something like:
> "Trackers do not see the content exchanged among peers, so they cannot
> detect peer pollution of content."
> 
> Thanks!
> 
> Ben.
> 
> On 15 Dec 2015, at 5:49, Huangyihong (Rachel) wrote:
> 
> > Hi Ben,
> >
> > We have submitted a new version. Would you please take a look to see
> > if the comments are solved or not?
> > Thanks.
> >
> > BR,
> > Rachel
> >
> >
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: Ben Campbell [mailto:[e-mail]]
> >> Sent: Tuesday, December 15, 2015 7:06 AM
> >> To: Huangyihong (Rachel)
> >> Cc: [e-mail]; [e-mail]; The IESG;
> >> [e-mail]; Zongning
> >> Subject: Re: Ben Campbell's Discuss on
> >> draft-ietf-ppsp-base-tracker-protocol-10: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> >>
> >> Hi Rachel,
> >>
> >> I just realized I hadn't closed the loop on this one. Your email
> >> addressed all my remaining comments.
> >>
> >> Thanks!
> >>
> >> Ben.
> >>
> >>
> >> On 19 Nov 2015, at 1:53, Huangyihong (Rachel) wrote:
> >>
> >>> Hi Ben,
> >>>
> >>> Please see further late replies inline^^. Thank you for your
> >>> comments.
> >>>
> >>> BR,
> >>> Rachel