Re: [precis] draft-ietf-precis-mappings - language suggestions
Heather Flanagan <hlflanagan@gmail.com> Mon, 11 November 2013 20:35 UTC
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Subject: Re: [precis] draft-ietf-precis-mappings - language suggestions
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On 11/11/13 12:32 PM, Heather Flanagan wrote: > Hello authors, > > I attended the PRECIS WG meeting last week and was looking through your > mappings document. I don't suggest knowing much about the technology > space, but I do have some suggestions regarding making the language a > bit more clear. I'm suggesting this purely as an individual, not as RFC > Series Editor. I hope you find the suggestions useful! > > -Heather Flanagan > Apologies, I meant to send this to the list as well!
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