[precis] Adam Roach's Yes on draft-ietf-precis-7613bis-08: (with COMMENT)

Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com> Wed, 05 July 2017 22:58 UTC

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Subject: [precis] Adam Roach's Yes on draft-ietf-precis-7613bis-08: (with COMMENT)
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Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for
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Nit: The final paragraph of section 1 is missing a paren after "[RFC7622]".

Nit: Step 2 in section 4.2.2 cites RFC 4013 as text rather than the normal
citation format of [RFC4013]

I have the same comment as I did on rfc7700bis regarding the implications of
operation idempotence.