Re: [precis] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-precis-nickname-18: (with COMMENT)

Peter Saint-Andre - &yet <peter@andyet.net> Tue, 01 September 2015 17:56 UTC

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Subject: Re: [precis] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-precis-nickname-18: (with COMMENT)
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On 8/31/15 10:50 PM, Ben Campbell wrote:
> Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-precis-nickname-18: Yes
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> Yay! Just a few nits:
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> -- Abstract:
> The abstract could be beefed up against? Maybe say what a nickname is in
> this context?
> [Edit: "Against"?  I meant "a bit".]

Good idea.

> -- 1.1, first paragraph: "...participants to specify a nickname ..."
> Plural agreement mismatch.

Noted.

> -- 1.1, 2nd paragraph:
> People really use "petname" for this? Who knew?

Yes. Perhaps a pointer to 
http://www.skyhunter.com/marcs/petnames/IntroPetNames.html would be helpful?

Peter



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