[precis] AD Evaluation of draft-ietf-precis-7613bis-07

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Tue, 13 June 2017 22:07 UTC

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This is my AD evaluation of draft-ietf-precis-7613bis-07.

I think this draft is ready for IETF last call, which I will request shortly. I have a few comments, all about references, that I think can be handled along with any last call comments.



- Should the references to RFC 7613 in the IANA considerations be updated to point to this document? (Some _say_ “this document”).

- There are some citations to RFC 4013 and 3545 that seem to be overtaken by events. For example, there is a statement that 4013 is obsoleted by this document, when in fact it was obsoleted by 7613. Please check to make sure that any such citations (and their surrounding context) will still make sense when this draft is published as an RFC.