Re: [precis] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-precis-7564bis-08: (with COMMENT)

Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> Tue, 04 July 2017 00:04 UTC

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Subject: Re: [precis] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-precis-7564bis-08: (with COMMENT)
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> On Jul 3, 2017, at 5:54 PM, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> wrote:
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>>> 
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>>> COMMENT:
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>>> 
>>> Is the 2nd to last paragraph in 13.5 intended as actual instructions to IANA?
>> 
>> Yes, I think so. Therefore the instruction should be provided in Section 11.1, with a forward reference to Section 13.5 for the explanation.
> 
> Is it possible to word the text to be added to 11.1 to minimize the need for IANA to make subjective decisions?
> 
> Thanks!
> 
> Ben.

Yes, I will propose text tomorrow.

Peter