[proto-team] revision of draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding attached

Lars Eggert <lars.eggert@netlab.nec.de> Wed, 07 June 2006 13:01 UTC

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Hi,

please find the text and XML version of my edits to draft-ietf-proto- 
wgchair-doc-shepherding-06 below. I'm also including an rfcdiff of  
the changes in HTML format.

Comments?

Lars

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Lars Eggert                                     NEC Network Laboratories


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