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Re: [proto-team] Re: One more spin of draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding

Henrik Levkowetz <henrik@levkowetz.com> Wed, 31 January 2007 11:57 UTC

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Subject: Re: [proto-team] Re: One more spin of draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding
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on 2007-01-31 11:47 Lars Eggert said the following:
> I've tried to reflect your comments in the attached version. Good to go?
> 
> Lars


Looks good to me.

I happened to see an editorial, though:

Section 4, 3rd para., 3rd line: 
s/Note that Document Shepherd/Note that the Document Shepherd/


	Henrik

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