Re: [proto-team] revision of draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding attached

Hi Lars,

Since the "write-up" referred to in (1.i) is *not* the Document Shepherd
Write-up, I think it is more misleading to referring to it as 'the write-up'
in a section concerned with the Document Shepherd Write-up.  It is also
not the questionnaire.  If anything, we have "questionnaire" + "document
summary" == "Document Shepherd Write-up".

Since we are talking about 3 different things, 3 different terms is, I
think, the best way to go.  So yes, I was hoping this would be clearer.

Regards,

	Henrik

on 2006-06-11 17:32 Lars Eggert said the following:
> Hi,
> 
> On Jun 9, 2006, at 17:48, Henrik Levkowetz wrote:
>> It seems to me that the two instances of questionnaire are OK.  But I
>> believe the following paragraphs should be fixed.
> 
> this introduces a third term ("document summary") in addition to  
> "questionnaire" and "write-up". Do you really think this is  
> clarifying things?
> 
> Lars
> 
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