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Re: [proto-team] small issues with draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding-07

Henrik Levkowetz <henrik@levkowetz.com> Tue, 27 June 2006 17:26 UTC

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Hi,

on 2006-06-27 18:33 Lars Eggert said the following:
> Hi,
> 
> Allison has pointed out that I forgot to include one of her suggested  
> additions in the -07 version of draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc- 
> shepherding. She has also suggested another small addition.
> 
> Below is a revision that includes both of Allison's changes and also  
> has some very minor language and RFC2119-terminology changes.
> 
> I'll ask that this be posted as -08 tomorrow unless I hear otherwise  
> from someone.

Overall the changes look good to me, except for the change in (2.g)
and (3.f) where I prefer the old wording (..issues have been resolved..)
instead of ..issues are resolved..


Regards,

	Henrik


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