Re: [proto-team] revision of draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding attached

[Lars Eggert <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

On Jun 8, 2006, at 21:25, Henrik Levkowetz wrote:
>
> You've put quite a bit of work into this, I see.  Overall I like it,
> but I have one major disagreement:
>
>         I'm not especially thrilled with the elevation of "PROTO" from
>         something associated with the PROTO team to a term  
> specifically
>         for this process improvement.  The previous version of the
>         document didn't go as far as this goes, and I'd rather see us
>         move from reference to the 'PROTO' process to simply 'the
>         Shepherding process' or 'the Document Shepherding process'.

I didn't make that change - that has been there for a while (see the  
abstracts of -06 and -05). I'm completely fine with changing to one  
of your proposed terms.

> 	In line with this, I'd propose to change any reference to
> 	PROTO Write-Up to 'Document Shepherd Write-Up' throughout the
> 	document.

Also OK.

> Lesser comments:

Agree with all of them, will make the edits.

Lars
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Lars Eggert                                     NEC Network Laboratories

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