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Re: [proto-team] revision of draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding attached

Lars Eggert <lars.eggert@netlab.nec.de> Thu, 08 June 2006 12:03 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars.eggert@netlab.nec.de>
Subject: Re: [proto-team] revision of draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding attached
Date: Thu, 8 Jun 2006 14:02:50 +0200
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Hi,

On Jun 7, 2006, at 16:09, David Meyer wrote:
> 	Sorry about the delay in responding. First, thanks for
> 	doing the work. The document has been sort of ideal since
> 	Allison updated it. Second, I like your changes, so no
> 	substantive problems here.

thanks for the feedback! What does the rest of the team think?

Find a small update below that fixes some wording and grammar nits only.

Lars


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