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Re: [proto-team] small issues with draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding-07

Lars Eggert <lars.eggert@netlab.nec.de> Wed, 28 June 2006 12:05 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars.eggert@netlab.nec.de>
Subject: Re: [proto-team] small issues with draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding-07
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On Jun 27, 2006, at 19:26, Henrik Levkowetz wrote:
> Overall the changes look good to me, except for the change in (2.g)
> and (3.f) where I prefer the old wording (..issues have been  
> resolved..)
> instead of ..issues are resolved..

OK, will undo those before submission.

Lars
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Lars Eggert                                     NEC Network Laboratories



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