[proto-team] small issues with draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding-07

Lars Eggert <lars.eggert@netlab.nec.de> Tue, 27 June 2006 16:33 UTC

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Subject: [proto-team] small issues with draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding-07
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Hi,

Allison has pointed out that I forgot to include one of her suggested  
additions in the -07 version of draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc- 
shepherding. She has also suggested another small addition.

Below is a revision that includes both of Allison's changes and also  
has some very minor language and RFC2119-terminology changes.

I'll ask that this be posted as -08 tomorrow unless I hear otherwise  
from someone.

Lars

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Lars Eggert                                     NEC Network Laboratories


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