Re: [proto-team] editing draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding

Hi,

I've gone through most of the document, but got stuck in Section 3.3  
- the changes between -05 and -06 don't seem to make sense to me. For  
one, the text is no longer synchronized with the figures, but  
additionally, the new 3.a doesn't quite fit with the original flow of  
tasks and 3.c probably shouldn't be a step at all.

Some hints on what the intent here was may be good.

Thanks,
Lars

On Jun 2, 2006, at 12:10, Lars Eggert wrote:
> In addition to those, I've identified some other possible changes  
> that I'd like to run by you to see if they make sense:
>
> (1) One of the changes I've started to make is replacing  
> "shepherding WG chair" by "document shepherd", because secretaries  
> can be made shepherd, too. This also affects the title, which is  
> currently "Working Group Chair Document Shepherding." I'd like to  
> suggest at least "Working Group Document Shepherding" but like  
> "Document Shepherding after Working Group Last Call" even better  
> (see point 2).
>
> (2) There are currently multiple pieces of text that describe the  
> responsibilities of the shepherd in slightly different ways. As I  
> understand it, the shepherd manages a document through all stages  
> after WGLC, i.e., through AD evaluation, IETF LC, IESG evaluation  
> on to IANA and RFC Editor processing. If this is indeed the intent,  
> I'll unify those descriptions, because currently some of them don't  
> describe shepherd responsibilities during some of these stages.

-- 
Lars Eggert                                     NEC Network Laboratories

Re: [proto-team] editing draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding

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