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Lars Eggert <lars.eggert@netlab.nec.de> Sun, 11 June 2006 20:23 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars.eggert@netlab.nec.de>
Subject: Re: [proto-team] revision of draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding attached
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Hi,

On Jun 9, 2006, at 17:48, Henrik Levkowetz wrote:
> It seems to me that the two instances of questionnaire are OK.  But I
> believe the following paragraphs should be fixed.

this introduces a third term ("document summary") in addition to  
"questionnaire" and "write-up". Do you really think this is  
clarifying things?

Lars
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Lars Eggert                                     NEC Network Laboratories



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