[proto-team] Re: comment on draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding-06.txt
Ted Faber <faber@ISI.EDU> Fri, 31 March 2006 03:57 UTC
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Subject: [proto-team] Re: comment on
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On Wed, Mar 29, 2006 at 11:18:03AM -0800, Aaron Falk wrote: > I'm not sure who currently holds the pen on this draft, however, as I > am still listed as an author, I received a comment that 1.i, 1.j, and > 1.k are really all part of the same paragraph and should be a single > 'question'. While I've got your ear, an example would be a huge help. Reading the document, I just assumed that the writeup could consist of a series of unnumbered paragraphs that covered the points in Section 3.1. A document of that format seemed to confuse the Secretariat, who was expecting numbered answers to the "questions" in that section. Not a big deal, but it did require an iteration that an example would have avoided. -- Ted Faber http://www.isi.edu/~faber PGP: http://www.isi.edu/~faber/pubkeys.asc Unexpected attachment on this mail? See http://www.isi.edu/~faber/FAQ.html#SIG
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