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Aaron Falk <falk@ISI.EDU> Fri, 31 March 2006 03:57 UTC
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Subject: [proto-team] Fwd: [faber@ISI.EDU: Re: comment on
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Begin forwarded message: > From: Ted Faber <faber@ISI.EDU> > Date: March 29, 2006 12:10:33 PM PST > To: Aaron Falk <falk@ISI.EDU> > Subject: [faber@ISI.EDU: Re: comment on draft-ietf-proto-wgchair- > doc-shepherding-06.txt] > > Can you forward this to proto-team? > > ----- Forwarded message from Ted Faber <faber@ISI.EDU> ----- > > From: Ted Faber <faber@ISI.EDU> > Date: Wed, 29 Mar 2006 11:57:37 -0800 > To: proto-team@ietf.org > Cc: Aaron Falk <falk@ISI.EDU>DU>, Ted Faber <faber@ISI.EDU> > Subject: Re: comment on draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc- > shepherding-06.txt > X-Spam-Level: > X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.8 required=5.0 tests=ALL_TRUSTED > autolearn=unavailable version=3.1.1 > X-url: http://www.isi.edu/~faber > > On Wed, Mar 29, 2006 at 11:18:03AM -0800, Aaron Falk wrote: >> I'm not sure who currently holds the pen on this draft, however, as I >> am still listed as an author, I received a comment that 1.i, 1.j, and >> 1.k are really all part of the same paragraph and should be a single >> 'question'. > > While I've got your ear, an example would be a huge help. Reading the > document, I just assumed that the writeup could consist of a series of > unnumbered paragraphs that covered the points in Section 3.1. A > document of that format seemed to confuse the Secretariat, who was > expecting numbered answers to the "questions" in that section. Not a > big deal, but it did require an iteration that an example would have > avoided. > > -- > Ted Faber > http://www.isi.edu/~faber PGP: http://www.isi.edu/~faber/ > pubkeys.asc > Unexpected attachment on this mail? See http://www.isi.edu/~faber/ > FAQ.html#SIG > > > > ----- End forwarded message ----- > > -- > Ted Faber > http://www.isi.edu/~faber PGP: http://www.isi.edu/~faber/ > pubkeys.asc > Unexpected attachment on this mail? See http://www.isi.edu/~faber/ > FAQ.html#SIG _______________________________________________ proto-team mailing list proto-team@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/proto-team