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Lars Eggert <lars.eggert@netlab.nec.de> Mon, 12 June 2006 13:23 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars.eggert@netlab.nec.de>
Subject: Re: [proto-team] revision of draft-ietf-proto-wgchair-doc-shepherding attached
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On Jun 12, 2006, at 16:16, Henrik Levkowetz wrote:
> Since the "write-up" referred to in (1.i) is *not* the Document  
> Shepherd
> Write-up, I think it is more misleading to referring to it as 'the  
> write-up'
> in a section concerned with the Document Shepherd Write-up.  It is  
> also
> not the questionnaire.  If anything, we have "questionnaire" +  
> "document
> summary" == "Document Shepherd Write-up".

Oops - you're right. I think I placed that piece of text somewhere  
else in my mental map of the document.

I'll make the change but not email another version just yet - maybe  
there are other comments?

Lars
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Lars Eggert                                     NEC Network Laboratories



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