Re: [PWE3] [Errata Verified] RFC5601 (4069)
"Andrew G. Malis" <agmalis@gmail.com> Wed, 06 August 2014 19:35 UTC
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Subject: Re: [PWE3] [Errata Verified] RFC5601 (4069)
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Sasha, Just to give credit where it's due, Adrian was the source of the improved text. Cheers, Andy On Wed, Aug 6, 2014 at 3:29 PM, Alexander Vainshtein < Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com> wrote: > Brian, > Lots of thanks for a prompt verification and for the much better corrected > text. > > Regards, > Sasha > Email: Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com > Mobile: 054-9266302 > > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: RFC Errata System [mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org] > > Sent: Wednesday, August 06, 2014 8:36 PM > > To: Alexander Vainshtein; thomas.nadeau@bt.com; davidz@oversi.com > > Cc: brian@innovationslab.net; iesg@ietf.org; pwe3@ietf.org; > rfc-editor@rfc- > > editor.org > > Subject: [Errata Verified] RFC5601 (4069) > > > > The following errata report has been verified for RFC5601, "Pseudowire > (PW) > > Management Information Base (MIB)". > > > > -------------------------------------- > > You may review the report below and at: > > http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5601&eid=4069 > > > > -------------------------------------- > > Status: Verified > > Type: Technical > > > > Reported by: Alexander ("Sasha") Vainshtein > > <Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com> > > Date Reported: 2014-08-05 > > Verified by: Brian Haberman (IESG) > > > > Section: 12 > > > > Original Text > > ------------- > > pwAttachedPwIndex OBJECT-TYPE > > SYNTAX PwIndexOrZeroType > > MAX-ACCESS read-create > > STATUS current > > DESCRIPTION > > "If the PW is attached to another PW instead of a local > > native service, this item indicates the pwIndex of the > > attached PW. Otherwise, this object MUST > > be set to zero. Attachment to another PW will have no > > PW specific entry in any of the service MIB modules." > > DEFVAL { 0 } > > ::= { pwEntry 10 } > > > > Corrected Text > > -------------- > > pwAttachedPwIndex OBJECT-TYPE > > SYNTAX PwIndexOrZeroType > > MAX-ACCESS read-create > > STATUS current > > DESCRIPTION > > "If the PW is attached to another PW instead of a local > > native service, this item indicates the pwIndex of the > > attached PW. Otherwise, this object MUST > > be set to zero. Attachment to another PW will have no > > PW specific entry in any of the service MIB modules. > > This object may be modified only when the value of > > the associated pwAdminStatus object is down(2), and > > the associated pwOperStatus object has value down(2) > > or notPresent(5) such that the row in the pwTable > > represents an inactive PW." > > DEFVAL { 0 } > > ::= { pwEntry 10 } > > > > Notes > > ----- > > Description of the pwEntry object in the same RFC states that "The read- > > create objects in this table are divided into > > three categories: > > 1) Objects that MUST NOT be changed after row activation. > > These are objects that define basic properties of the > > PW (for example type, destination, etc.). > > 2) Objects that MAY be changed when the PW is > > defined as not active. A change of these objects involves > > re-signaling of the PW or it might be traffic affecting. > > PW not active is defined as one of the following > > conditions: > > a) The pwRowStatus is notInService(2). > > b) The pwRowStatus is notReady(3). > > c) The pwAdminStatus is down(2). > > If the operator needs to change one of the values for an > > active row, the operator can either set the pwRowStatus to > > notInService(2) or set pwAdminStatus to down(2). > > Signaling (or traffic) is initiated again upon setting > > the pwRowStatus to active(1) or setting the pwAdminStatus > > to up(1) or testing(3), respectively. > > 3) Objects that MAY be changed at any time." > > > > In further states (in tthe same description) that "By default, all the > read- > > create objects MUST NOT be changed after row activation, unless > specifically > > indicated in the individual object description." > > > > pwAttachedPwIndex object is used to stitch a couple of PWs represented by > > two different rows in the pwTable, with the pwAttachedPwIndex value in > > the row representing one of them set to the pwIndex of the other one and > > vice versa. > > Since there is no way in the SMIv2 paradigm to create two rows in the > same > > table in a single atomic operation, setting a this attribute in a pair > of rows is > > only possible when both are created. In order to do that, read-create > access > > mode of the pwAttachedPwIndex object has to be interpreted as ability to > > set its value when the row represents an inactive PW. > > In accordance with the quoted description, such an interpretation must be > > explicitly specified in the description of this object. > > > > Such a specification is missing in the current text, hence the default > > interpretation of the read-create access mode is holds. > > Proposed text fixes this problem. > > > > -------------------------------------- > > RFC5601 (draft-ietf-pwe3-pw-mib-14) > > -------------------------------------- > > Title : Pseudowire (PW) Management Information Base (MIB) > > Publication Date : July 2009 > > Author(s) : T. Nadeau, Ed., D. Zelig, Ed. > > Category : PROPOSED STANDARD > > Source : Pseudo Wire Emulation Edge to Edge INT > > Area : Internet > > Stream : IETF > > Verifying Party : IESG > > _______________________________________________ > pwe3 mailing list > pwe3@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pwe3 >
- [PWE3] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC5601 (4069) RFC Errata System
- [PWE3] [Errata Verified] RFC5601 (4069) RFC Errata System
- Re: [PWE3] [Errata Verified] RFC5601 (4069) Alexander Vainshtein
- Re: [PWE3] [Errata Verified] RFC5601 (4069) Andrew G. Malis
- Re: [PWE3] [Errata Verified] RFC5601 (4069) Alexander Vainshtein