Re: [Qirg] Pull request for new section "Comparison with multi-protocol label switched (MPLS) networks."

Bruno Rijsman <brunorijsman@gmail.com> Fri, 06 March 2020 00:07 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Qirg] Pull request for new section "Comparison with multi-protocol label switched (MPLS) networks."
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Hi Woj,

Thank you very much merging the pull request.

I reviewed your changes and I agree with them.

— Bruno

> On Mar 5, 2020, at 9:54 AM, Wojciech Kozlowski <w.kozlowski@tudelft.nl> wrote:
> 
> Hi Bruno,
> 
> I finally got around to merging. I've made two minor edits: (i) I changed the intro paragraphs to better put it into context. The key value of this section is that it relates to concepts networking people know and understand so I thought it's important to highlight that this is not an architecture proposal, but a though experiment to outline how a network can be built. (ii) I combined a few paragraphs together.
> 
> Final text: https://github.com/Wojtek242/draft-irtf-qirg-principles/blob/69cf47ee0eec902f3b6dc483b8198d8b4bbc64d5/draft-irtf-qirg-principles-03.txt <https://github.com/Wojtek242/draft-irtf-qirg-principles/blob/69cf47ee0eec902f3b6dc483b8198d8b4bbc64d5/draft-irtf-qirg-principles-03.txt>
> Diff (of my edits): https://github.com/Wojtek242/draft-irtf-qirg-principles/commit/69cf47ee0eec902f3b6dc483b8198d8b4bbc64d5 <https://github.com/Wojtek242/draft-irtf-qirg-principles/commit/69cf47ee0eec902f3b6dc483b8198d8b4bbc64d5>
> 
> I will be uploading the IETF 107 version of the draft on Monday (which is the deadline).
> 
> Thanks,
> Wojtek
> 
> On Mon, 2020-02-17 at 15:37 -0600, Bruno Rijsman wrote:
>> Hi Woj,
>> 
>> I have updated the GitHub pull request for the new section to compare quantum networks to classical networks (https://github.com/Wojtek242/draft-irtf-qirg-principles/pull/3 <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__github.com_Wojtek242_draft-2Dirtf-2Dqirg-2Dprinciples_pull_3&d=DwMFaQ&c=XYzUhXBD2cD-CornpT4QE19xOJBbRy-TBPLK0X9U2o8&r=xRe3k8UnFVGCjuC7RWUARpslGfYlRaP7D3dVZXHUEVc&m=ierDab_Kye53z6jREXO55QYyjvpd-Oejh_81TGUPpk8&s=D8pJduvZiHxVrglMYoNjrO1tUcRD3kc9s_YfBTa5W0s&e=>)
>> 
>> I tried to make it more compact (about half the size, 2 pages now) and more consistent with the style of the rest of the draft (less wooly language). 
>> 
>> I also included some points that came up in the thread with Patrick Gelard (e.g. the GMPLS reference).
>> 
>> Have a look at it, don’t be shy to let me know if more polishing is still needed.
>> 
>> — Bruno
>> 
>> PS: There is a merge conflict on the .txt file. Just merge only the .xml file and re-generate the .txt file.