Re: [Qirg] Pull request for new section "Comparison with multi-protocol label switched (MPLS) networks."

Bruno Rijsman <brunorijsman@gmail.com> Mon, 17 February 2020 21:37 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Qirg] Pull request for new section "Comparison with multi-protocol label switched (MPLS) networks."
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Hi Woj,

I have updated the GitHub pull request for the new section to compare quantum networks to classical networks (https://github.com/Wojtek242/draft-irtf-qirg-principles/pull/3 <https://github.com/Wojtek242/draft-irtf-qirg-principles/pull/3>)

I tried to make it more compact (about half the size, 2 pages now) and more consistent with the style of the rest of the draft (less wooly language). 

I also included some points that came up in the thread with Patrick Gelard (e.g. the GMPLS reference).

Have a look at it, don’t be shy to let me know if more polishing is still needed.

— Bruno

PS: There is a merge conflict on the .txt file. Just merge only the .xml file and re-generate the .txt file.