[quicwg/base-drafts] 45e033: Closing and draining tidy
Jana Iyengar <noreply@github.com> Thu, 27 August 2020 06:15 UTC
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Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] 45e033: Closing and draining tidy
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Branch: refs/heads/master Home: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts Commit: 45e033da8f481d3d0b85e335a4cf3beda602f1e3 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/45e033da8f481d3d0b85e335a4cf3beda602f1e3 Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2020-08-06 (Thu, 06 Aug 2020) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- Closing and draining tidy I took a careful look at the text here and found a few things: 1. There wasn't much redundancy, but there was a little. 2. The closing and draining states only apply to immediate close. So I moved things up. Shortened the top-level immediate close text, and moved text specific to closing or draining to the corresponding sections. There were a few bits that could be cut, and a few that needed to be better aligned with existing text, but nothing major. Most of this is unmodified text. There are a few bits that I had to rewrite. I will add comments for those. Closes #3907. Commit: 0c9512f6e81837cd4adba3ed670d3376dd072f73 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/0c9512f6e81837cd4adba3ed670d3376dd072f73 Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2020-08-06 (Thu, 06 Aug 2020) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- Remove self-reference Commit: d44244caca3fd09297fd467bf89bb3908eb90188 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/d44244caca3fd09297fd467bf89bb3908eb90188 Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2020-08-06 (Thu, 06 Aug 2020) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- Move general stuff into introductory piece And a few grammar fixes Commit: 43176fb5cd31d1c0f26c9be3a774dcb2f32eb6ff https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/43176fb5cd31d1c0f26c9be3a774dcb2f32eb6ff Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2020-08-06 (Thu, 06 Aug 2020) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- Better factoring of closing state introduction Also stop using 'closing period', which is confusing. Commit: cb1bca7cf8468a98a5153e1931a5c7536c8a824c https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/cb1bca7cf8468a98a5153e1931a5c7536c8a824c Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2020-08-06 (Thu, 06 Aug 2020) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- Remove mention of stateless reset Commit: a31d8dcdc8e35ff2d62899054aca458c71a31645 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/a31d8dcdc8e35ff2d62899054aca458c71a31645 Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2020-08-11 (Tue, 11 Aug 2020) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- s/the// Co-authored-by: ianswett <ianswett@users.noreply.github.com> Commit: 6aef5e42b482cb9a3efeab78fd6f3a92c79cf6b1 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/6aef5e42b482cb9a3efeab78fd6f3a92c79cf6b1 Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2020-08-11 (Tue, 11 Aug 2020) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- Ian's cleanup Co-authored-by: ianswett <ianswett@users.noreply.github.com> Commit: e980fc772bdfff04801b7f8febb1d68385655060 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/e980fc772bdfff04801b7f8febb1d68385655060 Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2020-08-11 (Tue, 11 Aug 2020) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- Maybe we don't need to specify reordering/delay at all Commit: e127ccad5d2285df6f7556b914871f70c4d577f7 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/e127ccad5d2285df6f7556b914871f70c4d577f7 Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2020-08-12 (Wed, 12 Aug 2020) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- Small tweaks Co-authored-by: Mike Bishop <mbishop@evequefou.be> Commit: 37a2d522f133bf26cd8064d0264d05ce7243bb54 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/37a2d522f133bf26cd8064d0264d05ce7243bb54 Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2020-08-12 (Wed, 12 Aug 2020) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- Rewrap Commit: 6cc520dad75038f046b05e785cecd9869bcf3306 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/6cc520dad75038f046b05e785cecd9869bcf3306 Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2020-08-27 (Thu, 27 Aug 2020) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- Many little nits Co-authored-by: Jana Iyengar <jri.ietf@gmail.com> Commit: f6c037d97b3e700569347af0d6c8a596eacd265b https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/f6c037d97b3e700569347af0d6c8a596eacd265b Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2020-08-27 (Thu, 27 Aug 2020) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- Wrap Commit: 7e359d21d1621612a2a6fb8e6fc71807f027ec20 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/7e359d21d1621612a2a6fb8e6fc71807f027ec20 Author: Jana Iyengar <jri.ietf@gmail.com> Date: 2020-08-26 (Wed, 26 Aug 2020) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- Merge pull request #3988 from quicwg/closing-draining-refactor Closing and draining tidy Compare: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/compare/1d94d9924da1...7e359d21d162
- [quicwg/base-drafts] 45e033: Closing and draining… Jana Iyengar