Return-Path: X-Original-To: quic-issues@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: quic-issues@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id BC9B2129D19 for ; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 17:49:01 -0800 (PST) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -0.799 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-0.799 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_ADSP_CUSTOM_MED=0.001, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FORGED_FROMDOMAIN=0.199, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS=0.001, NML_ADSP_CUSTOM_MED=0.9, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=no autolearn_force=no Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (1024-bit key) header.d=github.com; domainkeys=pass (1024-bit key) header.sender=martin.thomson=gmail.com@github.com header.d=github.com Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id SDqOQRKDhj8y for ; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 17:49:00 -0800 (PST) Received: from m69-170.mailgun.net (m69-170.mailgun.net [166.78.69.170]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id C69EC1293EC for ; Tue, 29 Nov 2016 17:49:00 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: a=rsa-sha256; v=1; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=github.com; q=dns/txt; s=mailo; t=1480470540; h=Content-Transfer-Encoding: Content-Type: Mime-Version: Subject: Message-ID: To: Reply-To: From: Date: Sender; bh=R+HLHSl8+dMeqPoN4dTmQMdl7odXzAsAO5e7HOffXr8=; b=GkUE2fxt5O0xoEQFBAV0Dn1SmTgAITKGJBD+vrbTRoXOgU0ULd9DmwvO4/Z6pKWJYpino3Cx gY2fI3eLeX995vPZjEThkSKtDxJY+zwcMoFN7fYsMBJEkPaNaHoTMO7PkWaVig2vWdjzVlTK 6avoHIlfY+FWMEXWtYJX120kgAg= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=github.com; s=mailo; q=dns; h=Sender: Date: From: Reply-To: To: Message-ID: Subject: Mime-Version: Content-Type: Content-Transfer-Encoding; b=ol2YVuALUaOZFNrGlCmXrQMpkhnhjKCPtsUvq5OlEE2M0ITGgiowZ4bqg5ESPtptsY63Jl hMEHWqyP/07mTMzRouzTazYP+aoEfvP6OiO2ggsQqqOnW7a3bKsllT5c4+qJe9vDT/U30F2O +DgaDIHzOWQyxGXO5M0R001M8zauA= Sender: martin.thomson=gmail.com@github.com X-Mailgun-Sending-Ip: 166.78.69.170 X-Mailgun-Sid: WyJhNzYyYiIsICJxdWljLWlzc3Vlc0BpZXRmLm9yZyIsICI0MGYiXQ== Received: from github.com (Unknown [192.30.252.40]) by mxa.mailgun.org with ESMTP id 583e300a.7f6b8857f120-in03; Wed, 30 Nov 2016 01:48:58 -0000 (UTC) Date: Tue, 29 Nov 2016 17:48:58 -0800 From: Martin Thomson To: quic-issues@ietf.org Message-ID: <583e300adbb4c_caa3fdf00d4d130963a9@hookshot-fe6-cp1-prd.iad.github.net.mail> Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] 77df59: Work in progress: Improving the quality of the TLS... Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="--==_mimepart_583e300adb69a_caa3fdf00d4d13096210"; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Archived-At: X-BeenThere: quic-issues@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Precedence: list Reply-To: Martin Thomson List-Id: Notification list for GitHub issues related to the QUIC WG List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2016 01:49:02 -0000 ----==_mimepart_583e300adb69a_caa3fdf00d4d13096210 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Branch: refs/heads/tls-bit Home: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts Commit: 77df591022658679dcc837e3187ad29cd9f70e6d https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/77df591022658679dcc837e3187ad29cd9f70e6d Author: Martin Thomson Date: 2016-11-30 (Wed, 30 Nov 2016) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md Log Message: ----------- Work in progress: Improving the quality of the TLS overview I've improved terminology throughout the early sections and tried to be more precise. I probably need to add a picture or two to help. The latter sections still need work. I want to move the "system component" diagram that I had to the main draft. It would be good to have a topological map of all the pieces. Commit: 5013b5b8b41700b4a696b74cafada655d0e07f6b https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/5013b5b8b41700b4a696b74cafada655d0e07f6b Author: Martin Thomson Date: 2016-11-30 (Wed, 30 Nov 2016) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md Log Message: ----------- Adding details of the interaction between QUIC and TLS Commit: 4abd4d0cbd3710dfc46832a4cb05ef0eee167c12 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/4abd4d0cbd3710dfc46832a4cb05ef0eee167c12 Author: Martin Thomson Date: 2016-11-30 (Wed, 30 Nov 2016) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md Log Message: ----------- Refinement of delivery requirements Commit: 01938d6a06d5cd9f0ce424c4c8c8b980e2bab566 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/01938d6a06d5cd9f0ce424c4c8c8b980e2bab566 Author: Martin Thomson Date: 2016-11-30 (Wed, 30 Nov 2016) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md Log Message: ----------- Fix client's second phase Commit: 8ec223c9b179d9b3a700dc2c5c599000147dcdc8 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/8ec223c9b179d9b3a700dc2c5c599000147dcdc8 Author: Martin Thomson Date: 2016-11-30 (Wed, 30 Nov 2016) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md Log Message: ----------- Expand on retransmission of handshake messages Commit: 59508f100c0628ba4df79ab514bed6be2b76d1fe https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/59508f100c0628ba4df79ab514bed6be2b76d1fe Author: Martin Thomson Date: 2016-11-30 (Wed, 30 Nov 2016) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md Log Message: ----------- Make it clearer what keys are used for which in packet protection Commit: 3a88e3a146cc92e6868e2374878690a31088142a https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/3a88e3a146cc92e6868e2374878690a31088142a Author: Martin Thomson Date: 2016-11-30 (Wed, 30 Nov 2016) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md Log Message: ----------- Pre-handshake clarifications Commit: 92a42f8219b5c6337e411a5097cd28042e836c87 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/92a42f8219b5c6337e411a5097cd28042e836c87 Author: Martin Thomson Date: 2016-11-30 (Wed, 30 Nov 2016) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md Log Message: ----------- Rework packet protection and key phases to be clearer and more correct. Commit: 45d1258f67ac46a5c9acce95e8713c9a4ad1bb90 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/45d1258f67ac46a5c9acce95e8713c9a4ad1bb90 Author: Martin Thomson Date: 2016-11-30 (Wed, 30 Nov 2016) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md Log Message: ----------- Ian had a few helpful comments Commit: eb8b9fa6c599ba6faa5b42309d3bb5f7910762fd https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/eb8b9fa6c599ba6faa5b42309d3bb5f7910762fd Author: Martin Thomson Date: 2016-11-30 (Wed, 30 Nov 2016) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-tls.md M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- reclaim that diversification nonce Compare: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/compare/77df59102265^...eb8b9fa6c599 ----==_mimepart_583e300adb69a_caa3fdf00d4d13096210--