Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial suggestions on the Streams section (#2730)

MikkelFJ <notifications@github.com> Wed, 19 June 2019 06:28 UTC

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mikkelfj commented on this pull request.



> @@ -187,8 +187,9 @@ QUIC:
 
 QUIC packet:
 
-: The smallest unit of QUIC that can be encapsulated in a UDP datagram. Multiple
-  QUIC packets can be encapsulated in a single UDP datagram.
+: A complete processable payload with a packet type, encryption level and
+  packet number. Multiple QUIC packets can be encapsulated in a single UDP
+  datagram.
 

An authenticated and encrypted container of payload usually carrying a packet number and sometimes a connection identifier and version information in its header.

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